HOLY, I REALLY loved this poem. A lot. It was awsome. Words just can't describe. And sometimes I get annoyed with having to comment on something people say, but you are definatley not one to make me erritated. I loved this. Write more! lol, Anywho, check out more of my poems, i'm sure i'll do the same. 5/5

Very commendable. I am glad you have friends. :)

Hey thanx 4 commenting on my poem, i checked you out and i love yours! keep it up

Wow powerful poem iliek this one you put so much emotion into it and the rhyming structure was really un-forced well done great write =]
keep up the good work and stay strong
5/5
lovelove
Alice
xxx
&&thanks for the comment =]