Comments : Days

  • 18 years ago

    by Jordan

    I picked this one because it was alone with no comments. Needless to say, it is a good poem. It reminds me that no matter what, life goes on, even if things are terrible. I like the message and I love how towards the end the lines become more short and choppy -giving out a simple message.

  • 18 years ago

    by brkendown

    Once again wonderful poem you have true talent! keep up the good work!