Awwwww i love it danny!!!!

Awwwww i love it danny!!!!

Beautiful in a way but some lines ran a bit awkward such as:
And ill admit it now, I love her too
[Maybe take out the andand maybe the now]
And if you want to know what TRUE loves like
[Maybe: If you want to know true love]
Then me and her, we'll show you how
[Maybe: Me and her will show you how]

YAY FOR MORE POETRY!

haha, im going to comment all your poems. i loooove this one.

good job =]

-Becca