by Stephanie and Laura Jun 1, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
We argue about were we come from |
I like this poem and on how based it on life. ^___^ A diffinite 5/5 |
Um.... that poem was good i'm not sure with the meaning... but it is good.... |
by PygmyPuff
This poem has a strange form but it is very nice. I think it would be better with synonyms of agree, rather than the repetition or the same word. |
by Sarah Ann
Wow that was really good! You could really write meaningful short poems and attract the reader so much. I love the simplicity of your work, so I will add you to my favorites and read more. Keep it up! |
Great peice, very welll written witha good flow and strong rythum. the pace is good keeping the reader glued and the content very clear with much truth. |