by Stephanie and Laura          Jun 1, 2006
    
        category :
            Life, society /
            about society
            
    
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            We argue about were we come from | 
| I like this poem and on how based it on life. ^___^ A diffinite 5/5 | 
| Um.... that poem was good i'm not sure with the meaning... but it is good.... | 
by PygmyPuff
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            This poem has a strange form but it is very nice. I think it would be better with synonyms of agree, rather than the repetition or the same word. | 
by Sarah Ann
| Wow that was really good! You could really write meaningful short poems and attract the reader so much. I love the simplicity of your work, so I will add you to my favorites and read more. Keep it up! | 
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            Great peice, very welll written witha  good flow and strong rythum. the pace is good keeping the reader glued and the content very clear with much truth. |