Great peice, very welll written witha good flow and strong rythum. the pace is good keeping the reader glued and the content very clear with much truth.

5/5

Wow that was really good! You could really write meaningful short poems and attract the reader so much. I love the simplicity of your work, so I will add you to my favorites and read more. Keep it up!

This poem has a strange form but it is very nice. I think it would be better with synonyms of agree, rather than the repetition or the same word.

[PygmyPuff]

Um.... that poem was good i'm not sure with the meaning... but it is good....

I like this poem and on how based it on life. ^___^ A diffinite 5/5