Quit

by Stephanie and Laura   Jun 1, 2006


This is the moment I want to die
This is the moment I,m wanting to cry
The tears role down my chalky face
As I start to fade away from this place
I hate all I have, I hate my life
Nothings fare it all has a price
is living worth the pain I got truough
watching all the old and the new
who needs friends when all they do is lye
who needs friends, who don't stand by your side
whats the point of going to school
watching all the stoners thinking there kool
if all we here is gossip and crap
then whats the point of entering this death trap
I'm done play'in these games
I'm done breakin lifes rules
i've cheated and won
but now im done
im out I quit
in no longer willing to mess with it.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Navy SweetHeart

    That poem is really good.. it's like i was thinking it and then you wrote it.. it's like i was there. keep writeing you are so talented

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow...powerful poem...i loved it...you said (well...wrote^.^) your message brilliantly with just the right amount of emotion.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Good Poem, i Like the RS. but It Had ALOT Of Grammar & Spelling Errors.. But i Love the Message.. Also the Ending Was Wicked! I Loved How it Just Stings.((Thats A Good Thing)) Good Write...

    \4/5\

    xoxo

    xLauren3

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    That was a great poem! i loved the quickened pace and rhyme flow. It was brilliant. Keep up your great work, your simple talent amazes me how you write so well.

  • 18 years ago

    by Rusted x Heart

    I like the way the rythmic pace accelerates as the poem reaches the end, it seems very fitting, as if you were going through someones train of thoughts and then they get excited and just...conclude. Nicely done. the Only thing is, perhaps spell check the poems before posting, theres a few minor things that could use changing grammatically.

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