Very nice with the rhyming, I liked the way you said the emotion.

Life is not all bad ;_;

keep hanging on to that small thread of life... what you do, you can never erase. if you have to be alone, it's better than being with lying friends. YOU are your own best friend. YOU have seen yourself since your first day of life and YOU have control of it!

Good poem with a good meaning, But theres a few spelling mistakes and some bad grammer, But that doesn't really matter. The poem itself was brillant. I loved it. And thank you for your comments ^_^ 5/5

`Taleee xx

I like the way the rythmic pace accelerates as the poem reaches the end, it seems very fitting, as if you were going through someones train of thoughts and then they get excited and just...conclude. Nicely done. the Only thing is, perhaps spell check the poems before posting, theres a few minor things that could use changing grammatically.

That was a great poem! i loved the quickened pace and rhyme flow. It was brilliant. Keep up your great work, your simple talent amazes me how you write so well.

Good Poem, i Like the RS. but It Had ALOT Of Grammar & Spelling Errors.. But i Love the Message.. Also the Ending Was Wicked! I Loved How it Just Stings.((Thats A Good Thing)) Good Write...

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xoxo

xLauren3

Wow...powerful poem...i loved it...you said (well...wrote^.^) your message brilliantly with just the right amount of emotion.

That poem is really good.. it's like i was thinking it and then you wrote it.. it's like i was there. keep writeing you are so talented