That was a awesome poem it was great becuz u did another part, keep ^ the good work.

Hey darl i luv reading p0ems that have parts..if u get wht i mean. like u never no whts gona hppen next l0lz nnneway great j0b with this 0ne. beautifully w0rded. great j0b a t0uching piece. h0pe ur g0od! =] xx

lOve frOm
d0ra

I guess it's true, that good things always end
It took so long for me to comprehend
And everything just fell apart
Along with the prices of my broken heart
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Loved that stanza tehe. This was a bit sad. A very good poem though. Showed alot of emotion, and it all flowed beautifuly. Keep your head up and keep up the awesome work! 5/5

.x.TaLeEe.x.

Well this poem was meaningful and bore genuine feelings but work on the verbs' teanse.

keep it up

Ur last stanza fits so perfectly together well done!!!

I love you dear. And the poem too. It made me cry. XOXO Call me

Such an amazing poem...it's so well put together...

Aww this is sweet and sad.

The pain almost seem to hard to bear
Why does this life have to be so un-fair?
Wishing we were together, but were apart
This sadness cuts so deep in my heart

^ very touching stanza, very emotional, wonderfully written.

Great job

Thats so sad that things didnt work out,
such a heart felt poem.

have you considered puting the two together
into one big poem instead of breaking it into two.

5/5