Against cold sheets

by Stephanie and Laura   Jun 1, 2006


When I went up into that dark quiet room
i didnt realize just what he was about to do

he pushed me down
against the cold sheets
i said
what are you doing, no, please.

he said
come on, i know you want me
i see the way you stare

i said I'm not ready
you don't love me, you don't care.

shut up is what he told me,
as he held me down so tight.

he unzipped his jeans,
as i put up a fight

he said you know you like it.
frantically i said no, again

he slipped on the rubber
and at that very moment, my worst nightmare began.

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  • 17 years ago

    by kida

    That freaked me out a little bit but i like it mayb u could expand on it>?
    frm kida xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Rin

    Ahhh sweetie , i felt the hirt and the pain,That should never have to happen. This flows nicely. Keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by minnie30567746

    I like the way you just let the reader guess at what was going to happen next. It is assumable, but you don't say it out right.:) Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Eduardo Serrano

    Wow.. that's like the main word I can say right now. I think this is a really sad poem but very well written. ~__^ And if this is true about you or a friend then I'm also sorry that it happened. u__u. 5/5 for dope lol.

  • 18 years ago

    by Navy SweetHeart

    Wow.... that poem was really good... brought back memorys though... you are very talented.

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