by Chelsey Jun 1, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
When age hits your body and you can’t do what you used to |
by Simon Hayes
I like the truthful approach in this poem. Age is something we all have to face, you've portrayed the life of an aged woman very well!! |
by Laura
That was such a beautiful poem, the flow was great. I am very impressed. |
by Darien
Ohhh Chelsey!! you wrote a wonderful poem! I really liked the rhymes. |
by Natalie
Wow, This was really good. A little sad. But really good. I loved it! 5/5 |