In the eyes of beauty...

by Rain   Jun 1, 2006


Eyes that glisten
Shades of gold.
Sharp and piercing,
Staring cold.
Flying with their
Iron wings.
Royal elegance,
Like a king's
Sleek, clean feathers.
White, brown,
Straight, neat,
The talk of town.
Deadly Talons,
That can kill.
Screeching war cry,
Deep yet shrill.

That dog-gawn eagle
So brave
So strong
Never running
Never wrong
So symbolic
Such perfection
So forgotten
No recollection

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  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Two things... "king's" instead of "kings" and "dog-gone" instead of "dog-gawn".

    I really like the imagery in this one. It's awesome. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Stacey

    Your use of words were great :D poem wasa pleasure to read :)

    p.s. comment back

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    WOW! how can the rating for that be 3.7?? that should be 5.0! that was really great! i loved how the words just seemed to trickle down the page and the descriptions and rhymes were excellent! truly great write! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Russian Bridge

    Is this me it me or is this about a bird or is there a hidden message cause the hidden message is pretty well hidden

  • 18 years ago

    by dee

    Hey amazing poem. great choice of words. keep it up...
    dee

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