Well i'm sorry running out of things to say its a good poem don't get me wrong there just somewhat depressing.
i guess thats the point, lol.

I love this poem, it seems to have so much truth and emotion into it, you really got your feelings out on this one, good work hun, please check out some of my poems and comment on them to let me know what you think, it would be greatly appreciated.
love cass xoxo

"someone speaks to me through my fire"....i love that line... it could mean so much...whether it means they are trying to talk to you but all there words are singed by your fire and they never truly get to you or they are talking to you and they love you so much that there words actually can penatrate the fire...well done....emotions very well expressed

This is my favorite of your so far, the emotions jsut linger and caress the page. I love the way you describe everything nad its jsut so ammazing. great jobb.

ur sis
lissa