Broken

by Jaelly Longoria   Jun 2, 2006


Dear mother
our friendship seems to end
I counted on you for so long
and the world started to mend
little by little i prepared myself for this
but never thought it'd hurt so much
my heart is trembling today
this very special day, my day
You left and now we feel alone
without you my life becomes more difficult
and at times i feel like you are dead.
I miss you so much,
i wish you would call for my birthday
all i did was cry and cry
and wished for you to call.
Father is really tired
he is too tired to make my day better
I feel alone, i don't know what to do
I'm so confused...
i hate it.. we are broken..
we did all the love go mother? -tear-

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Today is my birthday... my mother didn't call.. and my father was lazy to even take me out to have fun for a little while.
this family is broken i tell you..and it makes me cry.. i spent my birthday crying all day..
waiting next to the phone for my mother to call.

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  • 18 years ago

    by cassie

    I love this poem, it seems to have so much truth and emotion into it, you really got your feelings out on this one, good work hun, please check out some of my poems and comment on them to let me know what you think, it would be greatly appreciated.
    love cass xoxo