My throat is locked in silent state
As she laughs, smiles, and stares
And I can't seem to get enough of it
Of those glittering darkened glares

my favorite stanza. Astonishing and magnificent. Just beautiful!

Wow. This was awesome! I loved the 1st stanza. A great way to open up the poem. Keep up the awesome work! 5/5

`Taleee xx

Amazing piece!
you made my day =D
I love it hun its really great and wonderfully written!
very dark thou =(
Best Of Luck
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@...i loved this poem...its a really great write:):)...i loved how u only reveiled hoo it was in the last stanza...and when u said it was Night, that put another meaning on the poem...Amazing:):)...@

Woah. I have no idea what to write after reading that, except AMAZING.

I like this poem very meaningful. Keep up the good work.

I can almost picture myself that sinario... great work... not to sound weird but i can almost feel the pain n its evilness is sorta enchanting....but then again as i said im weird... n no im not a satanist so :P .....well again your work is awesome... keep it up...

Very well written love it.
Check mine out please
Midnight

I loved it.It was great.
keep up the good work.

Very great poem, keep writing

I love your poem, it's so intense and beautiful. I usually don't like dark poems, but yours is amazing.

Great job! 5/5

Keep writing.

This was a really good write. Very dark indeed. Horror stories should be this good.