Comments : The shell

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Short poem with short lines but alot of power. A really great poem. Loved it. Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by cassie

    I love this poem, it seems to have so much truth and emotion into it, you really got your feelings out on this one, good work hun, please check out some of my poems and comment on them to let me know what you think, it would be greatly appreciated.
    love cass xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by AnJolina

    Thats a good poem!
    ~!ugly & unloved!~

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Wow... phenomenal!!! you're so talented... it's... it's.... i have no words for this loll anyways, take care,
    -xXx-