I love this poem, it seems to have so much truth and emotion into it, you really got your feelings out on this one, good work hun, please check out some of my poems and comment on them to let me know what you think, it would be greatly appreciated.
love cass xoxo

Aww, very sweet and strong yet very good! 5/5 Keep up the good work! Thx for commenting on my poem.

-Stephanie-

Also, you should check out my poem Torn Between The Two it's about my parents as well.

WOW
I WAS NEALLY IN TEARS
I NEVER HAD A FATHER
AND IN A WAY IM HAPPY AS I DIDNT HAVE TO GO THOUGHT THAT
WHAT A WONDERFUL WAY TO GET YOUR FEELINGS OUT
GREAT POEM
KEEP IT UP

FROM LANA

Anouther really good poem
full of emotion
and.. i no how u feel
but it does get easier i promise!
dont give up
xx

Omg, i cna't belive i didn't comment this one. yeah, babe, i remember you telling me all about this, and i truly didn't know what to say to make you feel better. i mean, what COULD i say? but now, i just want to let you know that you are SUCH an amazing girl, Rina, and i love you for you...and you didn't deserve for that to happen to you. but you ALWAYS have your friends, and i will ALWAYS be here for you. because I LOVE YOU. xo.