Nice job keep it up.

"it is shatered in peices" should be 'shattered' and 'pieces'

"tiny peices" should be 'pieces'

So I thought it was interesting that your first two lines were nearly your last two lines. There was also a stretch in the middle with the repitition of "hard to ____" that I thought was pretty good. However, I think that once again you're telling instead of showing, and that you should work on using creative language and poetic tools like metaphors to deepen your poem.

Aww this is sad. are u ok now, though?
i hope u are, john