Wow this one is filled with strong emotions =] 5/5!

I really like your poem its good i kinda feel that way too so... Good job

Haha i think u should run the club!, cause that so much better then anything i write!!! keep up the good work :P and nice job 5/5
-Steven

:( How sad :( this is a great poem, i really like it, you are an awesome writer and thx for the comment on my poem, ment lotz!

VanessA

:( How sad :( this is a great poem, i really like it, you are an awesome writer and thx for the comment on my poem, ment lotz!

VanessA

:( How sad :( this is a great poem, i really like it, you are an awesome writer and thx for the comment on my poem, ment lotz!

VanessA

OH my gosh. This might be the most sad and inspiring poem I've ever read. It made me feel like I had work to do. That you need to do what you can before it's too late. Good Job.

Pamela

THis poem was written extremely well, it has alot of strong emotions...you are a very good writer please continue to write so I can read more of them