In my Mind

by Wasted Fake Smiles   Jun 2, 2006


See you lying next to me, holding on my hand,
You are so tired, just finished playing with your band.
You turn on your side, and look into my eyes,
You say, "close you're eyes, I've got a surprise."

I close them tight, nervous of what it could be,
He says "ok, open them", and a bouquet of roses sits for me.
It has a card that says "Darling Erika, it's you I dream of,
I think we're made for each other I'm in love.

I don't care about what all the other guys want,
I only want you, I swear I won't leave and haunt-
Your mind with my words, because I want you forever,
Can't you see baby, you and I, we belong together!"

I turn to him, my eyes brimming with tears,
"Baby, I love you to, and I will throughout the years.
I've felt this way from the second I met you, you make me smile,
Darling, with you, I'd gladly walk down the aisle."

I come back to reality, it's all just a dream,
What a disappointment, that really hurt my esteem.
It seemed so real, I thought he finally understood,
It was all in my mind, yet the dream was so good.

Can't believe, it was all in my mind..

~*Who Cares?*~

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~5*seconds*ago~

    I come back to reality, it's all just a dream,
    What a disappointment, that really hurt my esteem.
    It seemed so real, I thought he finally understood,
    It was all in my mind, yet the dream was so good.

    I loved that last stanza to be honest it kind of made me sad lol i get to attached to a poem or a book when i read it! but any ways you did an awesome job!

    KurMiT

  • 18 years ago

    by Navy SweetHeart

    Wow... you are talented... this poem was great... great job....keep writting never stop you are a very talented writer

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychil

    This poem was beautiful. You write from your heart and it makes the words flow so lovely. Wonderful job on this poem. beautiful.