Comments : In my Mind

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychil

    This poem was beautiful. You write from your heart and it makes the words flow so lovely. Wonderful job on this poem. beautiful.

  • 18 years ago

    by Navy SweetHeart

    Wow... you are talented... this poem was great... great job....keep writting never stop you are a very talented writer

  • 18 years ago

    by ~5*seconds*ago~

    I come back to reality, it's all just a dream,
    What a disappointment, that really hurt my esteem.
    It seemed so real, I thought he finally understood,
    It was all in my mind, yet the dream was so good.

    I loved that last stanza to be honest it kind of made me sad lol i get to attached to a poem or a book when i read it! but any ways you did an awesome job!

    KurMiT