When i hold you...

by Jordan W   Jun 2, 2006


When I hold you near,
When I hold you tight,
I feel as though everything will be all right.
You soothe the sores,
Unclench the muscles.
You tame the beast inside.
Without you I would be nothing.
If I lost you I know that I would just lie down and die.
With you in my arms,
I can do anything.
If you asked me to give you the moon and the stars on a necklace,
There is no doubt in my mind that I would get it for you.
Even if it killed me.
I would forsake it all if you but hinted at wanting it.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Heidi

    Yet another perfect one :D YAY i love reading yours, they're so short & sweet. haha IM FROM CANADA TOO! thought i'd just share that haha. wooott. seeyou! keep up the writing, it's awesome

    heidi.may

  • 18 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    That poem was awsum lol i dont normaly read these kinds of poems but yours is gud.

  • 18 years ago

    by REAL LYFE

    This is a beautiful poem.U really have talent so keep up the good work cant wait to read more of ur love poems
    -REAL LYFE