by SnugglezLuvsU Jun 2, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
The battle ground is covered with blood |
Well, I'm going to give this a three out of five. The concept you have is a good one. But you need to work on making things a little more 3D. And work on formatting and spelling to make it easier for your readers to digest. Overall I think this could be an excellent poem with some work. |