Ground covered in blood

by SnugglezLuvsU   Jun 2, 2006


The battle ground is covered with blood
so many died for u
so many cried for those who died
the battle ground is covered with smoke from the guns of the past
so many thoughts race through your mind before u do
you must understand how they felt
the battle ground is gone
a church lays there
a church of god
a church of love
no sheds blood here nemore
the battle ground is not here
but in ur mind of shameful thoughts

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  • 18 years ago

    by -Ghostship Fidelity-

    Well, I'm going to give this a three out of five. The concept you have is a good one. But you need to work on making things a little more 3D. And work on formatting and spelling to make it easier for your readers to digest. Overall I think this could be an excellent poem with some work.

    Keep working on it!

    -Tony

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