Another year's end

by Sorefromreality   Jun 2, 2006


More memories shared
in ten years we wont care
so value this time, it is precious
trying to improve what is left of us

the glares and insults have been exchanged
so many more people hav been changed
i'll miss those people very much,
but look at us, standing untouched

hate has graced us, but we resisted
unlike others we aren't narcissistic
so now a year of life has passed
i can't believe it happened so fast

seemed like suicide walking in those doors
like wishing for an early death gracing those floors
i lost some friendships and shed some tears
i broke some rules and conquered some fears

my only regret is letting it pass me by
when ur busy pushing through life, time sure does fly
i regret not treasuring every moment of this year
but at least by now i can look at myself in the mirror

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  • 18 years ago

    by lonelynow

    Wow, I REALLY liked that! "seemed like suicide walking in those doors" beautiful words.

    well done, another amazing poem.

    xoxoxoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Excellent poem. I think it has a great message. It had a very good flow too and the rhyming was spot on. 5/5 definitly

    Thanks for your comment, it was so kind and greatly appreciated...
    -Shannon

  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Nice job. I liked it. 5/5
    -Vino

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

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