I love this poem, it seems to have so much truth and emotion into it, you really got your feelings out on this one, good work hun, please check out some of my poems and comment on them to let me know what you think, it would be greatly appreciated.
love cass xoxo

An interesting poem, they do say that the eyes are the windows to a persons soul. Lots of emotion in this poem too, and for the most part the rhyming was pretty good. Take care.

That was a great description of a coming of age poem...but very sad. I liked it a lot...bad experiences made you grow...wow! Jpoet*