Comments : Goodbye

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    I think this is a really great poem. i can relate to it heaps and i loved this stanza:
    i wanted to be yours..
    i wanted you to be my everything..
    i wanted a happy ending
    i wanted to fall in love.

    keep writing your great =)

  • 18 years ago

    by This Is Me

    That is a good poem 4/5. I know how you feel, but I get held back from saying goodbye.