About A Girl...

by x. Sleeping Beauty .x   Jun 2, 2006


Once upon a time.
In the corner sat a girl.
Tears of black fell from her eyes.
As clouds darkened her world.

But she would smile it off.
Pretend she was OK.
Act like she wasn't in pain.
Almost every day.

She'd cry for weeks.
And bleed for hours.
And no one ever noticed.
The blood in the shower.

Her life was cold.
And her heart faded black.
No one could fix her.
Or take the pain back.

So alone she sits.
In the corner of the dark.
She watched her fairytale ending.
Be torn apart.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Raychil

    This was avery strong poem. I know how you feel and you did an excellent job expressing it. You have a great talent. wonderful poem. keep your chin up :).

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Very well penned. Conveyed a lot of emotion, and a very strong ending as well. Keep up the good work. 5/5 :)
    -Jenna xo

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Thats a really amazing poem. so many emotions expressed. i love it. keep up the good work your a great writer.

  • 18 years ago

    by cassie

    I love this poem, it seems to have so much truth and emotion into it, you really got your feelings out on this one, good work hun, please check out some of my poems and comment on them to let me know what you think, it would be greatly appreciated.
    love cass xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was so good. I loved the last stanza. Spesh the part that says, "She watched her fairytale ending, Be torn apart." I loved it. Awesome write! 5/5

    `Taleee xx

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