by Mark Jun 2, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
When I look and talk to you, |
by Roxy
Wow that was a bit deep and lots of emotion and i can tell this happend in real life becasue i can feel the sadness and depression good going xoxroxyxox |
Dang, lots of emotion. well writtten! |
by Poetess Lana
Wow... that was really good! do i have 2 jump somebody???? i'll bring my beanie babies and they can help! |
Greatly written, you really conveyed your true feelings in this one. And, Very stron ending as well. Keep up the good work. 5/5 :) |
by Natalie
Hmm. Whats this about hmmm? Lol it kinda reminds me of all the jessie stuff. Cooooool poem though. I liked it ^_^ Tehe 5/5 |