Comments : All your lies

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Hmm. Whats this about hmmm? Lol it kinda reminds me of all the jessie stuff. Cooooool poem though. I liked it ^_^ Tehe 5/5

    `Taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Greatly written, you really conveyed your true feelings in this one. And, Very stron ending as well. Keep up the good work. 5/5 :)
    -Jenna xo

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetess Lana

    Wow... that was really good! do i have 2 jump somebody???? i'll bring my beanie babies and they can help!

    YES!!! 5/5 mark!

  • Dang, lots of emotion. well writtten!
    yes yes... 5/5

    ashes

  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    Wow that was a bit deep and lots of emotion and i can tell this happend in real life becasue i can feel the sadness and depression good going xoxroxyxox