Oh wow, you did an excellent job. I always feel the same way, feeling so bad crying when i know that a lot of other people have it so much worse than i do. But, you sent out a really great message with this poem. I really like these kind of poems. Keep up the good work. 5/5 :)
-Jenna xo

There wouldn't be sunshine without the rain
there wouldn't be happiness without the pain.
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Loved those lines. This was a great poem, With alot of meaning to it. And its true aswell. Really awesome job! I loved it! 5/5

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Good poem. I'd make sure that I capitalize my 'i's and add all the apostrophes I missed if I were you, just because it'll make the poem more presentable, and people will be less likely to judge it for its appearance.

The two last stanzas were my favorites (actually the last stanza was my ... uh... super-favorite), probably because of a flowing rhythm that sort of pulled the reader along to a really solid conclusion.

Wow.amazing. u kno im very repetitive, but they are all so good! lovd everythin about this one.

Aw i can totally relate to this I really understand how you feel. In a way itds kinda inspirational... Well done I really think you explained emotions well... 5/5
- Polly