by Sar Jun 2, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Her father beats her while her mother watches, |
by SuperJenius
Great use of imagery |
by Jessica
Omg.. this was horrible ( the idea i mean ) it was just so sad.. but you expressed it extremely well, it all flowed well, and there was just tons of emotion! excellent write! 5/5 |
by Megann Lee
This poem was amazing, purely amazing. I'm really sorry if this is based on true events however. *Hugs* |
by Natalie
Wow! I really liked this one aswell. You used pretty good imagery. And if this is based on anything true, I'm really sorry. |