WOW!!
Eventhough this was truly a sad poem it rocked my world!! I loved the flow and you have the ability to make the reader feel compassion for the writer.
5/5 Excellent!

I like the paradox you used in the first stanza, if definitely caught my attention. It gave it a really good start, and then you ended it so well too. Wow, that is just amazing. I really liked this poem. Strong, emotional, and a very interesting story. I could relate to it.

"I know God is beside me
I know the truth is there
But it kills me inside to know
You never really cared"

That stanza clicked with me. Awesome job!

GooD PoeM....i LoVe iT.....KeeP uP Da WorK....-patti-

What does marrying your father have to do with anything. But I liked your poem outwise. It was good, keep up the good work.