Holy moly! This really sends out a message, because no matter what, wherever you, because there are always those gurls..or boys. Keep up the great work! 5/5 :)
-Jenna xo

Very nice... tho very short it really had alot of meaning!...nice job!

Wow.....That Poems Is Really Meaningful And Powerful! Tons Of Emotion In Such A Short Poem! Loved It! Outstanding Job
5/5
Love,
Steph

I also liked this one. But the only line that didn't seem to be all that it could be was this line-

'Though her life has been bad'

Because 'bad' just seems to bland. Otherwise I enjoyed it and thought it got the point across in minimal words. Nice job.

5/5
-Tony

Aw, omg i totally relate. you wrote excatly what i feel. amazing.

What a great poem! It has so much feeling and i can totally relate! I like the way you started each stanza with 'I know a girl'...really effective!

I can relate to this poem...well done!

keep up the great work...and if you ever wanna talk...I'm here!

x x x

Whoaa.....
I think you must know me lol.. sounds just like me!! I like how you used the pattern of i know a girl.. keep i t up 5/5

This is so true! there are so many people out there with depression that no one even notices, plus ur writing is superb! 5/5

As privately she falls.
[I thought you could say "As she secretly falls." instead. I dunno. It's up to you.]

I thought it was a good poem though. I liked the repitition you had going on. Thought it suited the poem alot. Nothing else I would change. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Wow... I really loved this one. Very strong and really says something. Somtimes reminds me of me (though I'm sure it reminds everyone of themselves sometimes) but yeah, a great write here as well. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5