What a totally awesome poem!
u r such a frreaking good writer
my fav lines were:
"Yet you still don't care and never will,
It's my dream that you're taking away.
The only thing that makes me happy,
Is taken from me to make your day."
5/5

Nice thought nicely written
great work
nice rhyme
keep it up
love
amy

Wow that was a breath taking!!!
very nice poem hun!
I love the idea its really amazing!
you did a great job
Keep it Up
NemO xoxox

Nice poem alway follow your heart you because when you dont it hurt to much to bare keep up the good work 5.5

Nicely done, you can still improve the flow. There was one part that didn't make sense

-I'm gonna work hard to get the cream

Keep it up

That was great! I mean, I could connect with almost everything it said because you allow space for non-dancers to know what you mean. I really enjoyed it, ^_^.

-Tony

Straightfoward, but it is complex from the emotional aspect. pretty good.

I love this poem espically the last two lines a great ending, i love the ideas in the poem and the emotions youve conveyed i can tell you meant it i love it xxALLYxx

Aww this was awesome! lol no wonder it's got 24 votes at 5! sheesh.. damn.. I loved it =) 5/5

Wow! Excellent poem, its so beautiful, all the words fit together to make the perfect effect of graceful dancing and everything. Ugh, i'm probably not even making sense, but I loved it! 5/5

Thanks for your comments by the way! xxx

Beautiful poetry, ur a great poet.

Then you complain I'm doing nothing,
Wasting my life for a simple dream.
But with or without you here with me,
I'm gonna work hard to get the cream.

I really do hate that....someone told me I was wasting life on a dream and I almost straight up smacked them in their face...I admire you standing up for your dreams and you wrote your emotions on paper/typed it very well!! Good Luck with dancing girl! Dreams come true as long as you believe...it seems as if you do :-)

CHelsey-Lynn

Sad poem. So your a dancer. From what I've known of dancers, it's more than just a passion. It's almost life. Two of my friends have danced for most of their lives, and have both taught, and done several different styles, including some of those that you've mentioned. Good poem. 5/5

Wow. Its great yet its sad, to follow your dreams but left with no support. I really liked this poem. You expressed your emotions really well with this poem. well done . 5/5

I love to dance! It's amazing to see it written like this! I love it ^^

This is 1 of the best ive read in a while ive got a new 1 if u wanna check it out thx
keep em commin
jeremy

I could really feel the emotions that were running through the words you put in that poem. You did a really good job showing everything you feel/felt at the time! great great job & keep up the fantastic work!

**meggie**

I love your poems. you really know how to capture your emotions in them.
once again
5/5

Wow that was lovely. thanks for the comment, i always return the favour :D
5/5 your poem was absolutely stunning

This poem is so good! It has a lot of emotion and description in it as well! Keep up the good work! 5/5

-Stephanie-