sometimes when you write the truth you get carried away. thanks for being honest, but those are the words that i felt, so thats how i expressed them and it takes a long times to do that sometimes. this poem is personal to me and means a lot to me, but thank you all for commenting and telling the truth.
~Mary

Your poem was really good. It really touched my heart. I hope I never get to experience that, but I know somehow I will. Thank you for your words. I'll try to remember them all so that I won't hurt os much when it happens. Good job.

That poem was great...i understand how you feel because every single sentence in this poem is how ive felt and still do.