by Navy SweetHeart Jun 2, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
A life so Innocent is torn to shreds. she tries to decide whether to let go as she slowly fades away... when she finally lets go someone grabs her hand. that person show her that life also has a good side to go with the bad. that one person saved her life and is only just beginning to understand why she let go. |
by Megann Lee
Hmm. Intresting. Maybe you could try to mkae it abit longer? And fix the grammer and what not. And form? But I like it. It was well written. 5/5 |