Asleep

Maybe its because you said your grandfather wrote this, but the piece seemed very wise. It was a very relaxing and wise piece, I felt. My favorite stanza was by far the first one, it had a lot of power, depth, peace and flow in it.

Brad

Wow.
props to your grandad he was very skilled.
beautiful poem.
hehe well good luck on that blackbelt test you'll be doing soon. i'm still orange :)
and another thing i've just recently started watching is Naruto, which by your display pic, I assume you like too.
I watch it with subtitles though...:P

Sorry about your grandfather. And I really want to thank you. You have been very supportive of me ever since I started in this site and I just thought I should tell you that! Until next time, peace and love! 5/5

Hey. I'm sorry to hear what has happened, however the fact that the poem was left is a beautiful thing. I'm glad that he was able to leave his legacy with you guys and have feelings written in words. Very few have the chance to, or ever do, leave that kind of thing for a family. It's beautiful, and thanks for sharing it :).