Hey
awsome poem!!keep up the good work if u ever wanna talk let me know dont be a stranger 5/5always

kate

Hmm. It had alot of spelling mistakes and the form and wha tnot was odd and threw me off, I like the idea behind the poem, just it was a little weird, maybe you could make it more descriptive? Or longer? But anyway I still gave it a five.

Beautiful sad powerful

keep the talent keep the faith keep the ability to write so beautifully

Laura

I like the poem, its very nice, except there are many errors. I was forced to give it a {4/5}. For example, here should be hear, its the verb to hear, not here as in there. Also childhood is one word, and victim is spelled with a "c". You wrote the worse it getts, there should be one t. And also "realise" should be "realize". Lastly the format is a bit strange, you should capitalise all the words at the beginning of the lines, and in your case each line should be one sentence, some are doubled.

[PygmyPuff]

Wow, i really loved this poem, it was short but right to the point, it was great.

Much love,

Steph

P.s: you misspelled victim