The Darkness

by Turtle   Jun 2, 2006


My Shadow wears
Punk Rock ripped jeans
A night black overcoat
And thousands of piercings
And he knows
The order of things
His hair is like a pit of spikes
My shadow
A monstrous fright
My shadow
A killer
My shadow
A billion razorblades
My shadow is everything
But now it slowly fades.......
Away...
Just darkness.......

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  • 18 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Great poem. I truly love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    The poetic language is good and it flows well but im not really sure of the purpose of this poem and because of this is was quite hard for me to get into it; i cant make out whether its so deep that its gone right over my head or if its just simple!

    -biscuit-

  • 18 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Theres a few lines that leave me thinking "What?", but as a whole this is a good poem.

    [PygmyPuff]

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