Theres a few lines that leave me thinking "What?", but as a whole this is a good poem.

[PygmyPuff]

The poetic language is good and it flows well but im not really sure of the purpose of this poem and because of this is was quite hard for me to get into it; i cant make out whether its so deep that its gone right over my head or if its just simple!

-biscuit-

Great poem. I truly love it.