I like it.

Oh wow^ he sure was detailed... lol
yeah this, like your usual style, is as impersonal as ever.... but it is very structured.. though there are some places scattered throughout the poem that are a little wordy... for instance lines in stanzas should be equal in rhyming scheme.... though you did end every line in a matching rhyming word....some where more complex then other lines in the same scheme...
the topic was awesome though!
:)
the worm

How in the world can u write poems on such broad and creative plots? i wish i posessed that kind of skill. my poems are suffering lately and not as good as usual but o well...i loved the way u told a real story. and the whole innocent getting convicted for some other persons crime is very true. i loved it, keep it up,
love ya lots,
sore

Wow.............. It was sort of shocking. Everything about that is true. It paints a picture about some physco dancing around to this deathly sad music about how he got away with this and didn't get caught.

Greta flow and alot of truth this poem has one word to describe it EXCELLENT 5/5 for making me think

Good!

i can see the emotions, and the sadness you feel..you did express your feelings well with this one!

keep it up!

Eh, I didn't much get into it.
It told a story, and I kind of felt the emotion, but nothing seemed to click for me...
And the flow was off.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 3.5

I think that there was a lot of great details. I really enjoyed this piece...

5/5

Haha damn jen this was good. gave me more ideas for some poems.5/5
**harlea