As I leave

by Vampyric Princess   Jun 2, 2006


As the days go slower and slower by, I think of the pain that's deep inside, i take this knife as it slowly takes away my life.

Deeper and deeper this knife shall go, setting me free, from those who keep me on a leash.

With every drop of blood, more of my soul comes out. free, that's what I want to be, and with blood leaving me now, I'm free

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  • 18 years ago

    by matt

    When i wread this poem i feelt what u were wrighting like i was doing what u were saying thank you for that i will be looking fored to read more of u work if u wish u can add me on msn my_cuts_are_bleeding@hotmail.com

    by matt

  • 18 years ago

    by Christie

    The pain is so excellently foregrounded in this poem. congrats on such a well written poem, i offer my best wishes. keep writing, u have such potential,
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lestat

    So very sad and true a part of life we all must face and fight and many do not win, It is a very well written piece, my only point of criticism would be it does not flow very easily due to the timing in the words but the visuals and the pain of the message are well accented please keep writing :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany

    I like your poem, its very good
    *~Brittany~*

  • 18 years ago

    by Nikki

    Really like it!! :]

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