Wow really long but way worth the read ya the ending made you want to re-read it and see how you made it differnt i really enjoyed it and i loved the twist i at first didnt see how it was a love story but then i got it. thank you for letting me read it... |
by Natalie
Stage one is set |
by Tara Kay
That poem was very long, and i had trouble getting into the poem, it seemed good and the imagery was cool. not my best choice of words but it wasnt bad. |
Wow... nice poem, it was well written and I loved the end, it really made the whole poem so much better. And again, your choice of words are amazing. Good Job again, your a great writer |
I have to admit that I had to force myself through this poem because I just don't enjoy dark stuff all that much. (that doesn't mean it was bad... just not my taste) |
Wow! this poem totally drew me in...i loved it so much...teriffic ending...i especially liked the ending...classic...making it a movie...totally unexpected...great imagery. |
by Emma
Wow this is astonishing. I love the whole movies idea. a bit long but worth it. great writing. |
by Allen
Hey i really liked this poem... like i said before you have talent. once again you pulled it off, great vocab, imagery everything fits. well done |
Hey that poem is great... really it is i loved it... thanx for the comment... sorry this isn't long... but i still have to pack... |