Simon that was so pure and touching. It actually brought tears to my eyes because of its simple honesty and beauty. A wonderful, enchanting write my friend.
Amour,
Kim

Wow!! Simon, this poem really got my hyper. I really liked the strong words you used. Very powerful, it felt so commanding. I also liked the ending, very good. Haha, you are talent sir, very talented.

Wow soft simple and to the point so much said with no wasted words, I loved this one my hats off to you a true wizard of word craft.
Tim

I loved the 3rd stanza. This poem was really good. You did a great job on it. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee xx