Wow. that is all i can say. just wow. that was so excellent!! it was powerful, sad, interesting, and contained such a great message all at the same time.. it was a simply amazing poem! 10/5

Great poem, I really liked the imagery and details you put into this. It made me feel like I was on the battlefield, which is scary!!.. Awesome stuff!

I agree with everyone. It was beautiful and you captured the mood, and the image and the truth, just perfectly.

Bravo. you did a wonderful job!

Amberinaa*