My Shadow

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Jun 3, 2006


Written With A ' Poem Generator ' In English Class.

My Shadow Wears
A Vail Of Deception And Lies,
A Jacket Of Deceit,
And Sunglasses That Hide The Tears
She Cries.

Her Hair Is Like
Woven Flames, Burning In The Night.

My Shadow Is A Fallen Star
That Will Never Hit The Ground
She Spins And Twirls, Falling Faster,
But Missing Everything Around.

*** I Took Out Some Parts In The Template That I Didn't Like..lol

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  • 18 years ago

    by NoPatience

    I Really Liked The Flow Of This Poem. It Was Amazing. And The Descripiveness.... But Over All- 5/5

    *~*LoveLustTragedy*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5.. Great poem {{I requested Paper Wings from that contest}}

  • 18 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    Poem generators! EW. Lol, I'm kidding. Interesting poem for a poem generator..The fact that every word has a capital bothers me, a little hard to read, but no matter...Very descriptive, nice job..

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Hmm. Very Creative, I like the flow of the poem alot, it's really well written. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I dunno, i didnt like it as much as others, i dunno why. But it was okay, it was short and didnt stand out but thats just me.
    x

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