by HumanAngel
This is a very, very emotional poem... it paints the perfect picture of a person with blue eyes... well done.. |
by Batscout
Rain, it's a nice poem. I like how you have zoomed in on they eyes to tell your story. You have a small verb, subject disagreement in the first two lines, by the way. In general, a very nice effort. |
by Daniel J
I liked this poem. I liked the content, and the rhyme (always my weak spot with poems). I also liked the use of repetition (refrain if you're a poem techy). |
by Goran Rahim
Another great poem here. |