by MizzBelle Jun 3, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Blood all around me, |
Oh and can you please comment and vote on my poems please...thanks in advance |
WOW! I really loved this poem!! It was so sad. The rhyming was spot on and the flow was excellent. All the words you used fitted in the poem well. You made it easily understandable. That shows great poem. I definitly rated this poem a 5/5 |