Very Impressive, Christy.I am so impressed as how you've grown as a poet over the years I've known you.Ilike the style and voice you chose to write this in.This is so eloquently written yet without losing the emotion of the meaning.You continue to impress me with the meaning and passion of your writing.

GaryJ

Nice one

The blood of a poets broken heart shows up well on the white page with words that show the cracks and depths of that wounded heart. Keep up the good works.

Wonderfully written piece with a lovely rhyming flow. I love the old style of this too.
All the very best
Ben

Beautifully and elegantly written.

Em