by ღHazel_Kittenღ Jun 3, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
O Shallow Breath |
I loved your poem. The beggining is amazing, and I also loved this stanza: |
by Natalie
This poem was just WOW. Loved the first and last stanza. They really brought more power to the poem. Brillant job! You're a great writer. 5/5 |