O' Shallow Breath

by ღHazel_Kittenღ   Jun 3, 2006


O Shallow Breath
O Hollow Grave
Am I not worthy enough to save

Must I endure
Must the pain go on
Because right now I feel so wrong

Can you not save me
Please take me away
Seriously, must I stay?

He broke my heart
And I've no where to go
I don't want to stay, No friendships to grow

I can't look at him
Without tears in my eyes
Is it wrong for me to despise

I Love him a ton
But he seems not to care
I finally told him, I finally dared

Rejection my answer
He does not love me
For my friend is all he sees

My heart is torn
Broken more than in two
But still my heart wants to pursue

A fatal attraction
I didn't know
Now the blood shall run and show

O Shallow Breath
O Hollow Grave
I'm Too Far Gone To Save

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I loved your poem. The beggining is amazing, and I also loved this stanza:

    Can you not save me
    Please take me away
    Seriously, must I stay?

    Great job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This poem was just WOW. Loved the first and last stanza. They really brought more power to the poem. Brillant job! You're a great writer. 5/5

    `Taleee xx

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