Loved it, understanding the world and the way it works can sometimes be a scary thing

You reach out in air, beseeching a grasp
And they glare like you've never asked''

Thos lines are just amazing. I could feel what you'd written because I've felt the same. The whole poem really. rules.

xxx

Oops you represented ME in this poem!
I totally understand the part about the studies, its already what I'm passin throu! lol, this is so annoying!
I love the poem hun! last stanza was PERFECT! the poem was well written and enjoyable to read =)
Luv u hun & Miss u =(
Yours..
xOxOxOxOx

As friends today can kill with words
They listen but they've never heard
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I loved those two lines. This poem was WOW. I loved it. And it had so much meaning to it. Really great job! Keep it up! 5/5

.x.TaLeEe.x.

Wow really loved this poem
so much feeling went into it
can feel the meaning of it too great job 5/5

I like this poem very meaningful. Keep up the good work.

I love it, I love it, I love it. your now on my fave's list.

I love it! fav. part is
"And parents refuse to understand
At times you want that helping hand
You reach out in air, beseeching a grasp
And they glare like you've never asked"
It was great i give you a 5/5
tiffany

I feel the same way every day...i think this poem is deep but anyone could understand where shes coming from i truly love this poem...

I love this poem!!!!!!!!! I wish I wrote it!!!!!!!!!!!!! anyways no one rates my poems so if you could please look up a poem called "Why me" and "Have a nice day" and leave a coment with them both I would be happy to rate all you're wonderful poems! I give you a 5/5 for that poem!!!!

Very well written.

As friends today can kill with words
They listen but they've never heard

^^ I can't tell you how many times I write stuff like that in my poems...its serious...I've been heartbroken so many times from what friends say to me and they fail to realize it....sadly this poem speaks the truth but you've represented the truth very well! I enjoyed this read and the way you write, it was a pleasure!
Chelsey-Lynn

It really good i can relate